I like it.
Couple of nitpicks though.
Seems like the bass is a little muddy. It could just be the lame headphones i have to use since I'm away from my good stuff for the holidays, but maybe it's a little distorted even? Not sure, it just didn't sound primo.
The drums seem a little too prevalent in the mix, and I think they could be panned even a little wider.
I love the piano.
The guitar feels a little 'hollow' almost. How did you mic it? Almost sounds like it was mic'd from the rear... I dunno. I'd love more brightness out of it. (I usually do a small diaphragm condenser right at the 12th fret, and another towards the sound hole if I can.)
On the whole though, the track fits together very well and could do with maybe just a little polish. A bit of delay/reverb here or there as it all feels dry, that sort of thing.
In the end, I like it. Good work!